Posted By: neurodude ()
Posted On: 11/07/2006 06:30 am
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Name of Site/Business: The Stop Smoking Guide
Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales
Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?
Additional Comments/Notes
The Forum and Blog have not been started yet. I should get to those by next week. I am just looking to see if there is anything that I can improve upon for the search engine positioning and for a higher CTR.
Any Ideas?
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Posted By: clane777 ()
Posted On: 11/17/2006 08:55 am
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First, I would move your benefits section to the top of the page right off the bat. For folks to stay on your page and have that much text you need to hook them with something right away and just a red text sentence usually isn't enough unless it says "your house is on fire. I see flames from here".
Second, lots of text! Made me want to print and read while I smoked a cigarette. It is a good message but just couldn't get past the first page...
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Posted By: neurodude ()
Posted On: 12/28/2006 06:31 am
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OK, some changes have been made. Any opinions will be greatly appreciated!
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Posted By: angellqt ()
Posted On: 12/31/2006 03:46 pm
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Great site easy to navigate and full of good information on the subject .. I even sent a link to my son 
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Posted By: neurodude ()
Posted On: 01/03/2007 09:08 am
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Awesome, thanks. Hope it works for him.
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