Posted By: dwapachee ()
Posted On: 01/21/2007 07:14 pm
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Name of Site/Business: HOWTOWINinfo
Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales
Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Images failing to load
Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?
Additional Comments/Notes
This is brand new and I am brand new to this (please take it easy on me), any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
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Posted By: sfraise ()
Posted On: 01/31/2007 02:28 pm
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Hi, you need more content for starters. Also a graphic on the top left side doesn't load. I also wasn't real sure what you were getting at exactly, I'm guessing tips on how to win at gambling games? I'm assuming your goal is to get people to click on the "Get a free tip" graphic so I would maybe elaborate on why someone would want a free tip and what I as a surfer would acheive by getting a free tip, and what the free tip actually is about. Web surfers have a very limited attention span and I personally had the urge to just hit the back button right after it loaded.
Another super importan issue with your site looking at a search engine view point is the title and description tags. Your title is just simply "home", Your title should be something with your main keyword that you're trying to acheive as search engines place a big emphasis on this when ranking your site. An example you might use is "How to win with wagering schemes - betting methods" or something along those lines. Also you have no description tag at all, this should also have your main keyword or words in it, as well as be an enticement to a vistor that would see your listing in a search engine. An example would be "How to win at online gambling with free wagering scheme tips and betting methods".
I will mention that you might want to pick your main keyword to be something with "how to win" as your domain name has that in it, this is another factor the search engines place quite a bit of weight on.
[ Message was edited by: sfraise 01/31/2007 02:40 pm ]
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Posted By: dwapachee ()
Posted On: 02/19/2007 05:45 am
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Thanks sfraise.
I have revamped the website now, and am looking for a re-review please. I have changed the Meta description, although am going to go in and change it again further, but I completely changed the layout, colour scheme etc. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!!
Thanks!
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