enhanceyoursite.biz/

Posted By: gobob ()
Posted On: 2007-Mar-09 16:57


Name of Site/Business: Enhance Your Site

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Typos and grammar



Additional Comments/Notes
This is my first (nearly) one page site. I'd like to get suggestions about sales copy: benefits I missed, length, and other suggestions for improvement.



Posted By: bigbirdemma ()
Posted On: 2007-Mar-15 14:59

have you considered splitting it up into separate pages? It is a bit much for one page.


Posted By: gobob ()
Posted On: 2007-Mar-15 16:45

Thanks for your suggestion. smile

I am currently running a split test between the original "long copy" page and an alternate page with most of the Clickbank material on a second page.