Name of Site/Business: Pacific Title-24

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness



Additional Comments/Notes
This is my first website, so feel free to pick away at it. Thanks for all input.

I have a service business catering to engineers, architects, and contractors, so I wanted it to be clear, concise, and most of all professional looking. Did I succeed?

You are wasting a lot of potential.

Page titles are important. Naming your home page simply "Home" instead of using relevant keywords in the page title is a waste.

Your title banner is quite large and wastes space, as does your "welcome" bar, which is totally unnecessary.

I'm using a widescreen LCD, your entire site is left aligned and looks bad because of the huge blank space on the right. If you can't make it fluid, at least center things.

I think you should provide more info on what your service does to meet the requirements. Don't just say you provide required reports, tell me what they are and why they are required.

"Built with Net Objects Fusion Essentials" - is that a requirement to use their program? Otherwise why are you giving them free advertising?

YELLOW, wow that is almost blinding, you may consider toning down the color a little bit.

The "Info@PacificTitle24.com" is just kind of hanging out. And if you click on contact us it is a different email address listed.

If your site is regional or area specific you may try to work that in so to help optimize the best people to your site. For example if I am looking for your service and I live in Missouri, I want Missouri companies, if I live in and around La Mesa, California. I want to find companies that are close to me there.

I did not like the yellow color I would consider changing that.