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ncsleepshop
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Posted: 2004-Jan-30 17:00
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Name of Site/Business: esleepshop.com

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?



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HaxMc
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Posted: 2004-Jan-30 20:57
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Hi,

I think your site achieves its purpose. You state what your site offers at the top of the page, but the font may be too small for some people. Navigation I did not have a problem with. The site looks clean-cut and easy to follow. One problem with navigation is that when you rollover some of the links, they turn the color of the cell they are in. Maybe not a big deal, but the link, in a way, disappears.

Glad to see a site map! I love them! Also, good job placing your phone number and all contact information on the site. Some people just don't do that right now. Then again, you are a business that has been around for quite some time and probably have a much better understanding of it. smile

Just some other comments. You may want to change the search text from "Search for Stuff" to maybe "Search our Products," "Search the Site," etc. Also, the search page tells you nothing about what you're about to do. It is just form fields. You may want to include something about what exactly we'd be searching instead of "Entire Site" Label the search field and maybe put the form inside a template so it matches the rest of your page.



Hugmaster
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Posted: 2004-Feb-07 18:43
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Hi

Just to let you know that I'm looking at this site from a viewpoint of accessibility as I am totally blind and using screen reading softare to access everything on the net.

1. does you site achieve the purpose of getting you further in...On the whole I'd say yes, although the amount of links you're greeted with might be a little intimidating. On the accessibility viewpoint if a screen reader came across a labelled link the context of the link might be difficult to determine. In my own software you can call up a list of links without actually reading the page, so good in context links are necessary to enable me to understand where I'm likely to end up.

2. You mneed to change you title to something a little more descriptive for better search engine optimisation.

3. The button at the bottom of the page is labelled back, but doesn't tell me where to, incidentally this was on the home page so I'd got nowhere to go back to smile

Having said all of the above, yes, a very good e-store for beds, loaded quick enough to keep my interest and had enough beds to keep you asleep forever smile

Good luck
Darren


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