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sunchy
Joined: Aug 09, 2004
# Posts: 22
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Posted: 2004-Sep-07 13:00
Name of Site/Business: Fighter Spirit.com
Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales
Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Typos and grammar
Images failing to load
Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?
Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?
Additional Comments/Notes
Thanks My friends 
[ Message was edited by: OAC 10/16/2004 04:22 am ... Reason: Corrected business name ]
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lindawarren
Joined: Aug 29, 2004
# Posts: 19
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Posted: 2004-Sep-10 03:37
Too busy, too many items to look at, not sure who is selling what? Most people don't like the hard-sell and get frustrated trying to read one small item after another. Back up and let people breathe.
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swapx
Joined: Jun 21, 2004
# Posts: 10
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Posted: 2004-Sep-10 05:34
What is is exactly that your are selling? Is it cars, travel, or home businesses? If I can't tell after 3 seconds on your home page what your business is, I am gone to the next site.
Too much text and too many unorganized links on the home page, with small font.
And what is the purpose of the "News Flash" section on the top left? that is valuable selling space and should be dedicated to categories of your offerings and not news about your site's update. If I am after a hot new home business, do I really care if you just added a new link directory to your site? Put all that on a horizontal bar at the bottom of the site and dedicate your main page to big ads about your offerings.
I would replace all the small links and text on the home page with large attractive tag lines about your hot new opportunities, and specific once.
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darkfrost
Joined: Jul 14, 2004
# Posts: 16
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Posted: 2004-Sep-11 06:50
As a visitor, this website throws up some red flags immediately:
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Advertisements are littered on the right and left hand side menus.
"Online Home Bussines Opportunities" <== Smack in front and center. Your first piece of 'content'.
Email spam type box as your second piece of 'content' with links to external websites.
Your third and fourth peice of content is a mix of external links and internal information and google advertising.
More spam type pictures follows that are not related to anything but the general notion of a quick buck.
Advertisements are littered on the right and left hand side menus.
On the bottom of the page: is this actually the first piece of content? Oh wait, its just an advertisement in the form of a 'click here'.
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With the above in mind, I, and any awake visiter will come to the following conlusions:
1. There is no content.
2. I should be wary as anything I click is probably an advertisement.
3. I should not trust you.
4. Leave immediately.
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Sorry to be so negative, but if I weren't reviewing the website I would have left without a second thought.
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emalrola
Joined: Sep 12, 2004
# Posts: 6
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Posted: 2004-Sep-12 19:49
Business NOT Bussines. A typo like that in the title just stopped me doing anything else.
Then, when I tried to leave I got some awful pop-up.
Sorry, but I won't go there again.
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sunchy
Joined: Aug 09, 2004
# Posts: 22
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Posted: 2004-Sep-25 11:48
Thanks, Thanks and Thanks My Friend...
I Have Listened to and Complete Updated My WebSite.
Please  Review My WebSite Now
[ Message was edited by: OAC 10/16/2004 04:19 am ]
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mmjl
Joined: Oct 11, 2004
# Posts: 7
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Posted: 2004-Oct-11 12:50
I think this site looks too much like a message board
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bigsquid
Joined: Oct 07, 2004
# Posts: 10
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Posted: 2004-Oct-15 14:24
I agree about the message board, it looks like you got a little happy with the php code my friend. I think you would be better served by focusing your efforts; i.e. don't try to promote everything and get rid of some of that stuff. If it doesn't direct your visitor to your most wanted response, loose it. jm2c
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sunchy
Joined: Aug 09, 2004
# Posts: 22
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Posted: 2004-Nov-01 09:02
Thanks Again My friends!
I realy need that help because it is only way to success.
I have updated my website again.
Look now please and tell me what you think
All The Best,
Sunchy
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