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dustin1
Joined: Jan 11, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jan-16 14:27
Name of Site/Business: Free subdomains(aliases)
Site's Main Purpose: Fun/Leisure
Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?
Additional Comments/Notes
Have you got any ideas how can I promote it? I'm looking forward to your suggestions.
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seekz
Joined: Jan 11, 2006
# Posts: 19
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Posted: 2006-Jan-16 17:50
I only looked at the frontpage. It seems a bit dark. There are some gramatical errors, for example "Why as domains best that other" - What does this mean?
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newtvail
Joined: Jan 07, 2006
# Posts: 303
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Posted: 2006-Jan-19 02:29
Hard to tell from the home page exactly what you are offering, why I would want it, and how you benefit if everything is free. I think all of those need to be clearly answered on the page since you are offering something a bit out of the ordinary.
Agree with the first evaluation that the page is somewhat dark although the color combination is interesting and certainly not offensive.
Also agree that the wording does not make your meaning clear. Same with the FAQ page. You need some serious tweakking of the text part of your content.
There is no link on the page for returning to the home page. Search engines seem to hate it when that happens.
The lack of meta description in the <head> section will hurt your search engine ranking
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