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adamnyc74
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Posted: 2006-Mar-02 16:59
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Name of Site/Business: Arnold Supplements

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?



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I'm not having the best luck with the spiders and crawlers. Can you please take a look at my hompeage and let me know if there are any major problems that would deter them from indexing my site. I do have some pages indexed ..any major flaws in the html??




alfie1848
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Posted: 2006-Apr-15 08:35
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First of all, your site was somewhat slow in loading. Maybe cutting back on some of the content of your homepage would help this. Also, there were four different pictures that failed to load, so you might want to take some time and see what's going on with that. Your title bar and left sidebar are not only attractive to the eye, but also easy to navigate. However, the rest of the page seems cluttered, so consider cutting back a little bit so your visitors don't feel overwhelmed. As far as your search engine results go, the problem might not lie in your code, but possibly in the fact that the bodybuilding supplement market is extremely competitve, and there are LOTS of sites that you are up against. You have a good site, just consider some of the tweaks I suggested, and keep up the good work! Just be patient and consistent and the search engine rankings will come..



newtvail
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Posted: 2006-Apr-20 00:06
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Nice site overall. Easy to tell early on just what your business is and that is always a good thing.

Some suggestions
For people
- do not center the block of text at the top-center of your home page.
For search engines
- do get different titles for each of your pages
- do use a meta description on each page and they should be different as well.
- meta description should be above meta keywords.
- all your meta keywords (if you even want to use them) should appear somewhere in the text on that page.
- you have some duplicate page issues - at least 14 of them.
- run some of your pages through the W3 Validation checker and fix the problems it finds.

All the above are working against you for getting good search engine ranking.


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