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ukkiller
Joined: Apr 15, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Apr-15 15:50
Name of Site/Business: Devon Lighting Centre
Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales
Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Typos and grammar
Images failing to load
Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?
Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?
Additional Comments/Notes
This is my first project i am doing for my manager. I look forward to constructive critism  .
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Dinkar
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Joined: Aug 12, 2001
# Posts: 4391
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Posted: 2006-Apr-16 14:06
1. Replace the word 'stockists' with 'stockist'.
2. View your site with 'Active-X' disable browser.
3. Use small logo and use it on all pages.
4. Your order form is located on free hosting domain. It should be hosted on your domain.
5. Remove categories that show 'There are no products to list in this category.' message.
6. Use same design for all pages.
7. Add more product to your homepage.
8. The text in 'Christmas Section' blue area is hard to read and IMO looks dirty.
HTH.
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ukkiller
Joined: Apr 15, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Apr-21 12:16
I have changed the christmas section and made changes to the homepage. From the feedback i have recieved i have edited parts of the frontpage.
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