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assaf
Joined: Jun 20, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jun-27 21:32
Name of Site/Business: Business-Starter
Site's Main Purpose: Information
Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?
Additional Comments/Notes
It is a new website that I just finished updating its layout.
Thanks,
Assaf
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webmasterlabor_com_
Joined: Jun 15, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jun-28 06:38
Nice colors. Simple and easy layout. Good start. However, there's some issues--It's obviously an Adsense-driven site. As such it suffers from many of the problems Adsense-driven sites encounter:
Too many ads at the front page
Sparse content
Shallow content presentation
Possible solutions:
Lay out the content better so it will invite more clicks
You also need to draw the reader's attention faster--maybe have a more compelling "sales copy"
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assaf
Joined: Jun 20, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jun-28 09:21
Thanks,
Can you elaborate about the drawing the reader's attention, because I think this is the major problem/chalange of the website. If possible, with examples.
Thanks,
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vburin
Joined: Jun 17, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jun-28 14:33
- title:Business-Starter may better change to "Business practical guide"?
- SEO=OK! but 3 GOOGLE ads = so much...
- really need set default properties to it default values?
- using CSS-OK, but positioning by table?
- What is business field your site in? OR fully common - it's no business.
- Who are girls on your site? How are they relate your business?
- Contact Us is part of About Us, + I can't find info about Katzir Soze Investments...
- On Contact page: what e-mail I must type - your? what are fields optional? can your use SSL for it page? Where is privacy policy?
- What is your articles and updates? may be some samples...
- If need search I use GOOGLE server, but not other, so, search form must be your self only.
- Who is Authors of each page's content? Have you copyrighted information?
- index-1.htm much better!!!;-)
Regards!
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assaf
Joined: Jun 20, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jun-28 15:14
vburin
What do you mean in these two points:
- really need set default properties to it default values?
- using CSS-OK, but positioning by table?
I'm not a tech guy, so I'm not familiar with all phrases.
Thanks
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michelemoore
Joined: Jun 28, 2006
# Posts: 6
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Posted: 2006-Jun-29 20:37
Very professional look but there's nothing there that really
stands out with a high WOW! factor that grabs your gut. I'm not wild about the way the orange shows up on this screen.
The copy describes what you do from your perspective - I'd
rewrite it specifying exactly all the great things you do for the customer and client.
I wouldn't use Content as a header title... something more
like steps to success would be more compelling.
GREAT effort, hope these comments help!
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assaf
Joined: Jun 20, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jun-29 20:48
Are you sure you reviewed my site?
If yes, What do you mean by "The copy describes what..."
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sheetal_dadhwal
Joined: Jul 18, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jul-27 08:35
Hi Assaf,
first accept my congratulations on the wonderful work done by you. I checked your home page on 800*600 and found it very neat and professional. But i think i would like to suggest is,perhaps you could arrange the conent in such a manner that it would not involve excessive scrolling.
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assaf
Joined: Jun 20, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jul-27 14:20
Thank you sheetal_dadhwal
I'll think about the point you raised
Thanks,
Assaf
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georgem
Joined: Jul 20, 2006
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Posted: 2006-Jul-28 14:32
Hi
Looks quite nice
- Google ads stick out too much - Need to merge the colours more.
3 Sky Skrapers are too many - May be swap one of them on the left had side to a link unit like a nav bar
Maybe add a link to us - If you're wanting to build ranking.
Thanks
George
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