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home123

Joined: Dec 13, 2006

# Posts: 2

Posted: 12/13/2006 03:28 pm

Name of Site/Business: homeimprovementlosangeles.com

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Typos and grammar

Images failing to load

Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

Additional Comments/Notes
Thank you for your feedback & tips.

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sfraise

Joined: Jan 29, 2007

# Posts: 10

Posted: 01/31/2007 04:10 pm

Man, I'm not sure what to say. Your site looks kind of like an essay outline which makes me want to hit the back button as soon as it loads.

Even worse I'm guessing that you're not a master of the English language which I'm pretty sure is still the predominate language in L.A. I mean, what in the heck does "All
our selles and consultants professional & been working with our company 2-12 years." mean? And "We Los Angeles Home Improvement is bonded and licensed company base in the Los Angeles County." doesn't really scream out professional.

Next you list keywords in the middle of your body, and not that your trying to work keywords into your pagecopy, you really list "Keywords: bla bla bla"

This is nothing more than a spammy site made for a United States city by an apperant foreigner that uses babblefish to translate into English.

I feel dumber for having seen your site, exactly what kind of response were you looking for when you posted this?

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animated3d

Joined: Dec 22, 2005

# Posts: 352

Posted: 03/13/2007 06:47 pm

its well set i think and easy to navigate , but the index page is to long specially the many links on the bottom of the page can be confusing its better to put them in a seperate page.

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bigbirdemma

Joined: Mar 15, 2007

# Posts: 8

Posted: 03/15/2007 07:01 am

Is there a problem with your css, the layout doesn't look quite right.

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gobob

Joined: Mar 09, 2007

# Posts: 4

Posted: 03/15/2007 09:08 am

A few suggestions:

1) Run your text through a spell checker. A few misspelled words I caught: "hoem", "ambience"

2) Why hyphenate words like "envi-ronments" and "mu-seums"?

3) I would show small pictures along the left column of retaining walls, gas fireplaces, decks and patios, etc. that your company installed. They say, a picture is worth a thousand words. Also show additional pictures on the inner pages dedicated to specific areas of the house.

4) If you've been in business for a number of years you should have some satisfied customers that can give testimonials about the quality and/or timeliness of your work. Include some testimonials.

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