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angellqt
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Posted: 12/31/2006 04:43 pm
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Name of Site/Business: Fosters Trailer sales

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?



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Posted: 12/31/2006 05:57 pm
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Hi, angellqt, thanks for jumping right in and giving some reviews here.

Your site has considerable horizontal scroll at 1024x768 for me.

400K for an animated gif where all the horse does is flick its tail and move its head is a bit excessive. There are still plenty of users out there on dialup connections.

IMO, body copy looks neater and more professional using flush left/ragged right than all centered. Check your grammar, punctuation, etc. Little errors in those regards are a put-off to me.

"we’ve become one of the largest and best known Trailer Sales dealer in the area". And just where is that? You should emphasize your location, as that is important in a business selling large items that aren't easily shipped.

Subsequent pages lack navigation, forcing me to use my "back" button to get anywhere.

That running horse anigif toward the bottom... why? It looks a bit cheezy. And the links take me away from your site.

Good luck with it. smile



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Posted: 12/31/2006 09:22 pm
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Thank you very much I will work on all of your points I thought it may need help Feedback is a good thing in this case smile


 
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