saferoofcleaning.com

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ka7niq

Joined: Jun 28, 2007

# Posts: 1

Posted: 06/28/2007 01:45 pm

Name of Site/Business: Apple Roof Cleaning

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Typos and grammar

Images failing to load

Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

Additional Comments/Notes
Hello everyone.
This is my first post on this forum.
My site is a Webspawner site.
It is currently ranked two on Google for search term "roof cleaning"
I WAS number one for years, but got a web site optimizer program.
I put commas after my keywords, and changed things around, and dropped to number two, LOL'
My competitor www.pitchwitch.com is now number one.
He USED to have a web page with 2000 words like mine.
He recently switched to a short page.
I do not know if his switching to a short page, or my "optimizing" my site dropped me ?

I have more Google links then he does.
I am new at this, and I would be open to some advice.

My other web site www.brandonsingles.com is currently number two Google for crowded search term "singles group".

WHAT am I doing wrong with www.saferoofcleaning.com ?

HOW can I be number two is a crowded field like "singles group", yet can't get to number one in roof cleaning search ?

Am I doing something wrong ?

BTW, my competitor www.pitchwitch.com flat stole SOME of my old keywords, and uses them w/o commas.

The reason I placed commas behind my keywords was an attempt to boost my rankings on OTHER search engines besides Google.

Though I was number one Google for years, I was not highly ranked in other search engines.

Comments ?

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beth_lk

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Joined: Jun 23, 2004

# Posts: 985

Posted: 07/04/2007 08:41 pm

commas don't mean anything - really ! smile

I did look at your site very briefly as I am dead tired after a 4th of July of eating and fireworks but will look at it more for you in the next day or so and respond again.

For right now the only thing that stood out to me is you need a DOC in your meta tags - as I said I will look more when I have rested my brain cells wink

Beth

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