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chang001

Joined: Jul 21, 2007

# Posts: 4

Posted: 07/21/2007 09:35 am

Name of Site/Business: Tallahassee Referral website

Site's Main Purpose: Information

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Typos and grammar

Images failing to load

Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

Additional Comments/Notes
HI,
Let me first thank you guys for such a great informative website. I just created a website
in .net and would be glad if you could advise me how I could improve this webiste for search engine or any other way. Any advice is highly appreciated.
Thanks,
Chang

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quartzy

Joined: Aug 20, 2007

# Posts: 11

Posted: 08/22/2007 07:15 pm

Hi
I would like to comment about your site. At first I was confused as to what it was about, buying a home or what? You talk about buying a home and then your homepage goes on to give all other services. Your banner is a little sparse looking. And I think that the font you use for your writing is not good, and your writing needs to be more professional if poss, to draw people in, but if your'e giving a free service then I guess its OK

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sylviathomp

Joined: Aug 21, 2007

# Posts: 14

Posted: 08/28/2007 05:50 pm

Let me start off by saying that am no expert in websites, am seeking help myself, with that said and done. I reviewed your site and this is what I see. I like the color,clean and clear, your format was alright, (you could play around with that) (I think), the pages, seem to loaded within time, I felt that it had information that wasn't needed, like the Weather, latest news, gas prices. (or was that the point, I was somewhat unclear)I like for people to focus on the information that am providing or what's important, I find that many, ( not all ), but many cannot take in a lot of information at one time. I started to click on the latest news, but that's not what you want people to do...........I don't think. you don't want your visitor to be distracted from the more important things that you have to say, 'well that's my Two cents.

Sylvia
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PS: Am no expert on writting and spelling either!!!!

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shakes44

Joined: Jan 21, 2007

# Posts: 15

Posted: 09/05/2007 08:05 pm

Hi Chang,

I looked at your website and here is my opinion as a consumer. I like the concept of the site and it will be very useful once you add more referrals. I found it easy to navigate and the local information would come in handy for people visiting Tallahassee.

What I didn't like about your site is the About Us page. It seems like the page is written to try and sell your other site rather than give the person viewing it an idea of what your company is all about and what your site's mission is. If I read an about us page on a company I don't want to know how the site was developed and what you are using to run it.

Overall, I think with a little tweaking it will be a great informative site.

Maria

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