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certifiedcopier

Joined: Sep 20, 2007

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Posted: 09/26/2007 10:46 am

Name of Site/Business: Certified Copiers, LLC

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

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Hi!
Please check it out and tell me what you think.
Thanks!
Adam

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freeadlists

Joined: May 30, 2007

# Posts: 14

Posted: 10/16/2007 02:37 am

I guess the site is under construction right now per the returned webpage...

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OAC

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Posted: 10/16/2007 09:07 pm

No, you need to type in www. as well. The site has been poorly set up on the server.

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beth_lk

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Joined: Jun 23, 2004

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Posted: 10/17/2007 12:01 am

Right away I see 3 big things.

1. no DOC

2. in your meta tag, the word copier is wayyyyyyy over kill and the SE will see it as spam

3. Your ALT tags are too long and once again - copiers is used way too often

I would suggest that you do some searching here for Meta tags and the guidelines for correct use of them.

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freeadlists

Joined: May 30, 2007

# Posts: 14

Posted: 10/17/2007 05:14 am

I like the idea of a copier program -- something tangible. My wife ran one for DLA for a few years. At any rate, the site is very easy to navigate and the layout looks professional. Also, having the BBB online badge helps with credibility, especially for a new one.

Here are a few things I noticed along with other reviewers:

1. The keyword "copier" is overused. You could get a nasty-gram letter from Google making mention of it.

2. Having to prepend www. to your domain needs to be rectified. Many people will only type do****name.com. If that doesn't work, they'll move on and probably won't return. When I type in your domain name and .com, I had the impression the site was under construction because that was the page returned.
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Content on homepage:
The second half of the sentence below sounds awkward. Also, it has extra spaces.

You have: "Thank you for visiting Certified Copier® where Quality, Integrity and Value is not only our mission, but for our clients is an achieved reality."

Maybe rewrite: Thank you for visiting Certified Copier® where Quality, Integrity, and Value is not only our mission, but it's an achieved reality for our clients.
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"A Certified Copier® provides genuine Quality and through our auditable certification protocol establishes unparalleled Integrity as well. Enjoy real Value from a used copier source that cares about its clients and its reputation in the industry."

There are extra spaces. Personally, I don't like the term "auditable" (maybe audit-based, audit friendly or simply remove it)
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We market authentic OEM products including;
. Canon copiers and Canon toner
. Toshiba copiers and Toshiba toner
. Ricoh copiers and Ricoh toner
. Savin copiers and Savin toner
. Gestetner copiers and Gestetner toner
. Minolta copiers and Minolta toner

"including;"
Did you mean to use a colon instead of a semicolon?

The bullets aren't centered. They look like periods for omitted numbers.

Vendor copiers and Vendor toner -- redundant

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