positive-attitudes.com

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sevenheavenxs

Joined: Sep 27, 2007

# Posts: 1

Posted: 09/27/2007 10:09 pm

Name of Site/Business: Positive Attitudes

Site's Main Purpose: Advertising (eg Banners, Google Adsense etc.)

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

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Many thanks for any responses to help increasing this website traffic.

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beth_lk

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Joined: Jun 23, 2004

# Posts: 996

Posted: 10/06/2007 10:59 am

My first impression when I entered your site was "what a LOT of ads". I had to scroll down to get to the actual content - not a good thing for any customer.

The page set up needs changes - nothing I seen there within the first 2o seconds made me want to hang around. If I had found this through a different source, I would have left right away.

You have a lot of text in the middle and lower end, which needs to be larger or better yet some of it moved to a different page.

You need a LOT more content. you only have 2 positive attitude success type stories.

And again google ads are everywhere ! I am not 200% sure but I don't think you are even allowed to place a google code that many times on 1 page. But even if it is "legal" your site screams ADS! Everywhere I went I felt like I was fighting to get around the ads.

I thought several times I was going to an article within the site only to find out I had clicked on an ad.

This site needs work before it is SE ready.

I hope you take the time to research and learn all that you need to know. Most of the needed information/knowledge can be found right here in these forums.

If you re work your site, I will be happy to do a review of it again smile

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freeadlists

Joined: May 30, 2007

# Posts: 14

Posted: 10/16/2007 02:33 am

Way too many ads on the homepage page. I shouldn't have to scroll to the first topic on the page.

When I finally got to the content, I clicked on the "More Article on positive... link." When the link opened, I had to think which was ad and which was content while perusing the page. You need a lot more compelling content to drive more traffic.

You do have strong and relevant domain name.

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