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vincenzio

Joined: Nov 20, 2007

# Posts: 7

Posted: 11/20/2007 02:55 am

Name of Site/Business: Wedding

Site's Main Purpose: Information

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Typos and grammar

Additional Comments/Notes
Thank you very much for reviewing.

I want feedback and I want to know how I should improve this site.

Thank you!

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treat_cancer_nl

Joined: Aug 28, 2007

# Posts: 33

Posted: 11/20/2007 06:41 am

Wow it looks great. I would really not know how you can improve it.

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vincenzio

Joined: Nov 20, 2007

# Posts: 7

Posted: 11/20/2007 07:06 am

thank you

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beth_lk

Insider

Joined: Jun 23, 2004

# Posts: 985

Posted: 11/20/2007 01:16 pm

As for the specifics of the review you asked for - it is great !
Loads fast - nice looking - all in all very nice.

I maybe would have made my table a little smaller for those who still have a smaller monitor, to not have to use the slide bar at the bottom for width.

As for SEO ( which you did not ask for but I am adding )

Not so good.

Your meta tags are not within the SE guidelines. Way too many repeats of word wedding as one example.

Also I think you can make much better use of your ALT and of your H1 - H5 to reach a better ranking in the SE.

I did look at several of your pages and found the SE stuff I mentioned above the same on all of them.

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vincenzio

Joined: Nov 20, 2007

# Posts: 7

Posted: 11/21/2007 02:40 am

reasonable! thank you!

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abidan

Joined: Nov 25, 2007

# Posts: 2

Posted: 11/25/2007 02:01 am

I love the colour theme but there is a problem with resizing your page I pressume you know but you know but The headline box shrinks when you shrink the page width (anyone can join wedding box) meaning the text is unreadable. this is hard to explain but basically the page looks messy and loses shape when it is not open to max screen width.

I like the Left hand side of the frontpage with the articles and i would perhaps concentrate more on that area and limit the stuff on teh right like the members area login stuf - takes up too much room i think when you could have something better there.

Its my personal preference but i like menus on the left hand side liek the one you have kinda in the middle to the right with links to the shop, news and wedding gowns section......i think this would be much better on the far left as a traditional web page set up as it kinda gets lost in the content.

Over al tho i like the colour theme and its pretty nice to look at smile

i would be tempted to look further but i aint a big wedding fan!! smile

Hope this helps and Take care smile

Abi Andrews

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