mywebsiteworkout.com

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wysiwyg4

Joined: Jan 14, 2008

# Posts: 3

Posted: 01/14/2008 02:20 pm

Name of Site/Business: My Website Workout

Site's Main Purpose: Information

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Typos and grammar

Images failing to load

Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

Additional Comments/Notes
A free tutorial site that teaches beginners and DIY how to create, manage and promote a website. Includes Directory and Search Engines Submission tutorials, meta tags and more.

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beth_lk

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Joined: Jun 23, 2004

# Posts: 985

Posted: 01/14/2008 08:12 pm

I found your site full of helpful information - especially to the newbie.

I personally do not agree with everything you suggest for people to do or not to do..... but that is just my opinion wink

The site is set up very user friendly, and has a nice, neat layout.

I do think you could make much better use of your ALT tags.

I also found some of your text to either run on.... or to be choppy. I would suggest you have someone read it to you out loud so you can hear how it sounds to others.
I have a bad tendency to think quicker then I type and end up with not so grammar friendly sentences smile

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wysiwyg4

Joined: Jan 14, 2008

# Posts: 3

Posted: 01/15/2008 08:13 am

Hi Beth_lk

I thank you very much for your review.

1. Could you please point out where the text is choppy and where it is run on.

2. I will start working on the ALT tags.

3. What suggestions do you not agree with.

I thank you again.

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beth_lk

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Joined: Jun 23, 2004

# Posts: 985

Posted: 01/15/2008 07:16 pm

Too much of the text is choppy here and there for me to point out - which is why I suggested you or someone else reads it out loud. I did mainly notice this on your index page.

well remember it is all about opinions and different ways of thinking... but you asked lol you recommend that people submit their sites to SE - If a site is good and has correct SEO, it is better to let the search engines find you - my 2 cents any ways wink

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