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briansamuelss
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Posted: 04/04/2008 04:57 am
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Name of Site/Business: Fun Zone World

Site's Main Purpose: Fun/Leisure

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

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Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?



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Hello Crew Members,
Please review my site and provide me with your valuable feedbacks. FunZoneWorld is an online gaming center designed for kids. Keeping that in mind I have made the navigation simple. Please furnish your feedbacks so that I can work on it to make it much more better.

Thanks and Regards




gpetty46
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Posted: 04/06/2008 10:15 am
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Wow! That's an eyefull! Very visually busy, but I guess that's what kids' expect.

I think the game categories (i.e. Racing Games, Action Games, etc) could be a bit larger and bolder.

Perhaps lose the FWZ logo down the middle of the page. It seems (to me) to just add to the clutter.

Everything loaded and worked in my Opera browser. This is my first try at reviewing site here, so I hope I'm doing it right!



dannykastelijn
Joined: Apr 29, 2008
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Posted: 04/29/2008 06:19 am
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Hi,

I guess you need to create more choice on your page (action, arcade, race, platform etc. etc.). Site lookes good, I think it's atractive. I don't like the logo in the middle of the screen. Your site really is easy to navigate.

good luck,

Danny



 
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