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tmondo
Joined: Jul 13, 2008
# Posts: 2
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Posted: 2008-Jul-13 13:48
Name of Site/Business: Tmondo-Teenage Forums
Site's Main Purpose: Fun/Leisure
Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Typos and grammar
Images failing to load
Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?
Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?
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n_west_excite_com
Joined: Jul 15, 2008
# Posts: 3
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Posted: 2008-Jul-17 06:34
You've got some work to do.
Just my opinion, but I think you've got too much info on the front page. You're navigation on the top left is a good start, but it appears that you've got all the information sitting on the front page anyway, so it kind of defeats the purpose of having a nav bar.
Also, you probably don't want to have either the most recent chats or forum postings sitting on the home page. Some idiot could go in and make some derogatory or off color comments about anything, and it would then be sitting there for the entire world to read. Obviously not good, especially if you are targetting impressionable young minds.
Also, you are wasting too much of the home page on the image at the top. I think its too big and makes users scroll down too far to get to any of the content.
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Quadrille
Joined: Nov 15, 2000
# Posts: 1064
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Posted: 2008-Jul-17 10:39
Very, very slow to load; you may need to simplify the design or check the database setup.
Nothing useful on the screen; you have to scroll down to see anything at all.
Your registration process is deeply flawed - you must verify email addresses before allowing access, or you are inviting spam, spam, and more spam.
But, most seriously (from my point of view, as an old-ish man), I don't think teenagers will relate much to a site that uses that term.
You'd do better to promote the brand - 'tmondo' - making it plain that it is a teen world that you are addressing.
I may, of course, be utterly wrong on that 
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seowriter
Joined: Jul 19, 2008
# Posts: 19
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Posted: 2008-Jul-19 17:18
umm If I were a teenager I would get lost in there. But I am an old broad and I have to agree with the others rethink your design, Don't get me started on your source.. lolol But at least you are being pro-active. Good for you!!
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tmondo
Joined: Jul 13, 2008
# Posts: 2
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Posted: 2008-Jul-29 08:08
thanks for the suggestion......
i will be correcting those faults....
By the by any other suggestions please.....
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OAC
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Joined: Jan 25, 2001
# Posts: 6809
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Posted: 2008-Jul-29 11:36
Perhaps tmondo, if you reviewed a couple of other posters sites, they may review yours?
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